Another Approach... Any good ideas?

by Pisaka
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Thanks a lot for your attention. Recently I appeared on the stage with my sales copy. It was my first sales copy which took lots of efforts to be finished. My mother-tongue is Russian, so it just makes the business more complicated. That's why I require your precious advices.


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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    Your headline should be something modeled around your unique position which is translating articles, you need to fix that.

    Your sub-headline is more effective than the headline itself.

    That's where I'd start.

    best,

    Ross
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    • Profile picture of the author OutOfThisWord
      Your headline doesn't tell me what you are offering or compel me to read more.
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