My first sales page/pitch, advice please
I've been into affiliate marketing for a while and I'm pretty successful with that and so I wanted to start creating my own products and services.
I've just created my first product the Thumbnail Formula and it's designed for internet marketers.
I've run my first WSO for this product and it didn't convert, no sales at all.
So, I've gone back and made quite a few changes to the sales copy and I'd love to get some feedback on it before relaunching another WSO.
You can see the updated sales copy here
Thumbnail Formula
It's pretty basic in terms of design as I want to master a WSO before going out to the public, and at that point I'll add some pretty design elements.
Really appreciate your thoughts on this.
Thanks for your time.
Lee
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