Will You Please Critique My Copy?
I'm new here. I am working to learn copywriting and many people told me the best place to test a market is on the warrior forum.
I just recently posted my first WSO and I wonder if you more experienced folks would take a look at the copy and offer critique on what I could do to improve my work. Is it the copy? Is it the offer? Is it the product?
Any and all comments are appreciated.
Our post is located here: OK, so as I don't have the prerequisite number of prior posts, I'm not allowed to link directly back to the post. If you will search on N. Temple, you will find it easily. Sorry. Thanks. How else could I tell you exactly where to find the post?
Thanks in advance for your time.
Sybil
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