Please give review

It looks great.

But the only way to compare sales is to test.

Drive at least a 1000 targeted prospects to the page and see how it converts compared to your previous sales letter.

If your previous sales letter was written properly, I'll wager it outperforms the new design.

Remember: words sell. Not pictures.

Hi Justin and nice to meet you! It's great to see someone that knows how to create great looking killer pages. Is it my connection but the flash took a good 5 sec to load on my ADSL? It's acceptable, don't get me wrong...

Tell me, did you pick the colors yourself or had it picked by an Ad copywriter?

I'm just perplex as to the speed it loops? Makes me think about that google chrome advert where we see texts and try to guess the next word... but here we are talking about a lot more text in each sequence. That concerns me... I'm guessing you are a fast reader...

Take care,

Bernard St-Pierre
Marketing Consultant
Copywriter/Teacher

sales are the the same just steady and level on so far
i count on the product and features more than a pitch i assume they know what twitter is
i put the main selling points on the slides plus a link to the free trial
where they get emails explaining the benefits of the system during the trial

the site is slow yes, but working on speeding that up with some compression

i picked the colors yes but just picked them based on what is popular today blue
see facebook and twitter

the pause between slides on my system is 10 seconds ...... not enough?
also users have control if they hover over to "pause" skip slides etc

yeah i jsut went with what looks good to me so i lucked into these scenarios

i appreciate all feedback
my feelings don't get hurt i assure you
i go into knowing i know nothing and try to learn and grow

There is an inconsistency as to the speed of each slide which needs to be addressed Justin.

Take care,

Bernard St-Pierre
Marketing Consultant
Copywriter/Teacher

By the way, I'm using Firefox...

Bernard

It looks good. I think it will looks better if you will write that principal bar with BOLD . Anyway it's a good site . Get traffic and that's it

The site looks professional and has a good structure. I do think that you should create a video on what it does. It seems a little hard to understand what "tweet buddy" actually does and why someone would want to buy it.

I'm old school, slides and other flashy stuff are for game sites. If you want to sell forget gimmicks. Just my opinion, others may disagree.

I think it looks great, but agree that it is not entirely clear what Tweet Buddy will do for me

I second the video idea. I'll hook you up with a free camtasia video if you want, let me know...unless you already have that capability. But it does look slick.

I like it. I personally am a little tired of the mile long sales letters that just drone on forever. Your site is very clean and gets right to the point. Good job!

The banner images took 25 seconds to load and play on my system. My system is pretty fast, so I'm guessing your images are large. They may need to be re-sized both by dimension and resolution so they load faster.

Otherwise, I think you have a nice looking, functional site.

It looks like a giant revolving banner. An annoying banner. It goes too fast to read. I've no idea what the offer is but whatever it is - I don't want it. You're asking me to "click here for a Free Trial" - without my knowing what the hell it is you're offering.

You need at the very least a few lines of copy to explain what you have and why I should have it too. And then kill the revolving banner. It doesn't work. Either go to video or have a static image if you must.

the original sales page read like my wso which i think is LONG and makes me feel weird maybe a "why Tweet Buddy" page? trying to fix the slide show i suck at joomla and this dj image slider is roughing me up... video isn't my strong suit as m wife says i mumble :/

1) I HATE the slides. I timed them, and they stay put for approximately 2.5 seconds before changing on my browser. And NO, I'm not going to manipulate them myself. Don't make me work to become interested in your product.

2) I do agree that the site looks "professional." I suspect it does fairly well converting warm...in fact, REALLY warm...traffic. People who already know what the product does, and/or have already seen good customer feedback and testimonials from elsewhere...people who arrive already knowing that they want to buy...

3)...BUT, I don't think there's nearly enough info on that page to intrigue (much less convince) a lukewarm or cold prospect. The "Features" list was moderately helpful in this regard, but it reads a lot more like a spec sheet than a list of reasons to buy. Where are the benefits to me? What do I get out of it? What does it do?


If you're absolutely *convinced* you want to forego the traditional sales page, at the very least, add a tab that says something like, "About Tweet Buddy." Or, "What is Tweet Buddy?" Or, "What can Tweet Buddy do for me?"

Right now, there's no way I'm clicking on "Purchase" if I don't know what I'm looking at. "Enterprise" doesn't interest me at all. I'm not about to "Contact you" to ask you elementary things your sales copy should be telling me. And I've already talked about "Features."

You need at least SOMETHING for people who show up and don't have the faintest idea what Tweet Buddy is. Right now, that whole segment of the market has got to be bouncing away like so many superballs.

no idea what "it" is. Classic example of cutting your nose (sales letter) off, to spite your face (your income.)

It looks good, clear navigation, clear call-to-action button. Not super cluttered. Good professional design.

However, there is the BIG question/issue - What the hell does your service do? Brand new visitors will have no clue what it does and it most likely just X off if you don't answer this question somehow within 5 seconds of them landing on your page. I would suggest providing some type of answer in the form of value+benefits to your customer with that call-of-action button to get the best results from your site.

No idea what you're system actually does. Plus the slides turned me off.

Sure, you have great graphics ... but graphics don't put money in your pocket, your message does.

Just because you don't think long form sales letters look good doesn't mean they don't work.

But at the end of the day, it's your business ... run it how you want -

js

anyone know any good reliable economical video creation services?