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Tips for Writing a STRONG Resource Box - That's the best I can do!

by Beatrice
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Hello!

Following recommendations from the Warrior Forum I have now updated my 2x resource boxes to read as follow (see below). Any final tips on the resource boxes included below would be greatly appreciated before I start updating all my articles!

Example: - Do you think the message is clear? Would you re-phrase them? Would you add an additional point, etc.

1st resource box
"Click here to learn the secrets that have made big-name marketers millions. Do you want to get massive passive income flowing into your bank account? This FREE video shows you how!"


2nd resource box

"Click here to start creating your website today. This FREE EBOOK will walk you through everything that you need to build your entire website the easy way"
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  • Profile picture of the author Devid Farah
    Hi Beatrice,

    more tips:

    - Don’t include your full bio. People will lose interest.

    - Call to Action.
    Include a statement that tells readers what they will get when they click on your link and how it will benefit them.

    - Write a sentence or two to establish yourself as an expert and build credibility. People want to know if you are an expert and can solve their problems.
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    • Profile picture of the author Beatrice
      - Don't include your full bio. People will lose interest.
      My bio is not included at all in the resource boxes. I have inserted a copy of both of them in this thread for warriors to comment on?:confused:

      - Call to Action.
      Include a statement that tells readers what they will get when they click on your link and how it will benefit them.
      "click here to learn the secrets ..." is my call to action (as shown in the examples I have included).

      Thanks for your input but it will help me greatly if you could comment on the 2x resource boxes I have included in this thread.
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      • Profile picture of the author Devid Farah
        Originally Posted by Beatrice View Post


        My bio is not included at all in the resource boxes. I have inserted a copy of both of them in this thread for warriors to comment on?:confused:


        "click here to learn the secrets ..." is my call to action (as shown in the examples I have included).

        Thanks for your input but it will help me greatly if you could comment on the 2x resource boxes I have included in this thread.
        Beatrice,i was simply adding more tips to make the best resource box.
        Your resource boxes are really great!
        I like especially the first one,very catchy!

        All the best,
        Devid
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        • Profile picture of the author Beatrice
          Originally Posted by Devid Farah View Post

          Beatrice,i was simply adding more tips to make the best resource box.
          Your resource boxes are really great!
          I like especially the first one,very catchy!

          All the best,
          Devid
          That's OK. I was just puzzled about the bio part? May be for clarity I should re-phrase the thread title to: "please comment on my resource Boxes"
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    Ignore Devid. He was just trying to make a useless post by dispensing parroted advice.

    Only one tip regarding your second one -always use benefits. "Build your website" is not a benefit, it's work. "Discover how to make a massive online income" is a benefit.

    Dig?

    -Daniel
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    • Profile picture of the author Devid Farah
      Originally Posted by Daniel Scott View Post


      Ignore Devid. He was just trying to make a useless post by dispensing parroted advice.
      EXCUSE ME?

      You read the title's thread?

      It's not "comment on my resource boxes" it's "tips for writing a STRONG resource box" so i wrote tips "in general". "Bio" tip wasn't for her,was in general.

      I have just clarified with beatrice,there's no need to go any further.
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    Originally Posted by Beatrice View Post

    Any final tips on the resource boxes included below would be greatly appreciated before I start updating all my articles!
    What I love the most is I didn't even have to add the emphasis. It was already there.

    So yes, I did read the title. I also read the post, hence my reply.
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    • Profile picture of the author Devid Farah
      Originally Posted by Daniel Scott View Post


      So yes, I did read the title. I also read the post, hence my reply.
      That's okay.

      As i just said i simply thought to add more tips also for other warriors,for me the two resource boxes are okay and i agree with you regard the benefits.
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