Optin page critique and headline ideas please?
I previously posted a landing page critique with a video and apparently its not converting very well.
So....
I've made a complete overhaul and went with an optin page + sandwich page instead (after looking at Igor Kheifets "Crossing the free line").
Anyways, I would appreciate any comment, advice, suggestions especially on the headers please.
10 Minute Corporate Fat Loss Plan: The Quick & Easy Fat Loss for Busy Working Professionals
Daniel
(P.S: I'm doing some A/B testing on the video image, so it will show a newscaster lady or a tummy image)
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