-Expert Sales Page Help Needed - need help to convert
...After studying, and reading what it takes to make a good copy, I rewrote everything and decided to put it all on one sales page.
It seems like the long sales page is keeping visitors for far less time than the multi-page site was. My guess is they leave instantly after not being sucked in by the headline, and thus not wanting to read the long copy.
Another thing that startled me.. The average time on the site went from 90 seconds to 18 seconds, after I put upfront in my adwords Ad the exact price of the product. I thought that if I put the price before they click, they'll already be expecting to pay, so they'll stay longer...
That backfired, so obviously I'm unsure of what I'm doing and need some professional advice on this letter and even the adwords ad being directed to it.
Before my current headline followed by video set up, I had tried a more creative headline with a deck copy, and the video a little further down the page.. But, I thought it'd be better to have the video above the fold, but I had to scrap the deck copy...
If you can specifically give your opinion on this aspect, and of course the overall letter, it would be immensely appreciated
many thanks to all that help.
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