Newb Here - Please Critique This E-Mail Blast
I'm writing an e-mail blast pro bono for a client's website for some experience.
In this e-mail, I'm selling the main benefit of this dish-reviewing website and announcing something special for the month. Overall I want to inform the readers of the special for the month and then push them onto the site.
I'd like to know how well you think my copy reads and how compelling you think it is. I'd appreciate any help! Thank you.
p.s. I haven't developed a subject line yet. Was going to get to that later.
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Do you love Italian cuisine? Do you think you know how the perfect lasagna is prepared and what it should taste like?
If you're like most foodies, then you probably have a more discerning tongue, one that can tell the difference between Italian cuisine that's cooked with love versus food posing as Italian cuisine.
And with that said, we at [website name/link] want to give your good taste a home!
That's why we'reannouncing [MONTH] as Italian Cuisine Month!
That's right. This month will be dedicated to Italian Cuisine!
What is Italian cuisine?
You might be familiar with:
· Fettucine Alfredo
· Spaghetti Alla Marinara
· Pesto Linguini
· Neopolitan Pizza & many other dishes!
Dishes like these are what Italian Cuisine Month is all about!
And what do you get out of participating in this month's theme?
It means that you'll receive double points for every Italian dish you review and upload to [website name/link]. More points means you'll race to the top of our leader board faster; and the first to reach the top five by the end of the month will win a free meal at a designated restaurant.
And if you're new to Italian cuisine, then this is the perfect opportunity to win double points for trying out new food and critiquing it!
In a nutshell, now is the chance for you to eat Italian food, write about it, and win points faster so you increase your chances of winning more food.
But that's just it; we're focusing on Italian cuisine for only a month. We'll send out another newsletter on the 15th to show the current top five reviewers, and announce the final winners on the last day of the month.
So be sure to take pictures of your dishes so you can upload and review them on ADD A DISH [LINK]! The more you upload, the faster you climb the leader board, and the closer you get to winning more food.
And to get you started . . .
- Read our blog that's especially made for Italian Cuisine Month, which explains [blog title/reference/LINK]. It sheds a lot of light on different pasta sauces.
And . . .
- Visit our new Cuisine Of The Month section [LINK] to remind and inform yourself of this month's sponsored cuisine and for some helpful information about the contest.
We can't wait too see and read what you eat!
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