First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated
I'm working on my first ClickBank product, and am in the "Sales Letter" Phase (I'm growing accustomed to incorrect Usage of Caps and Quotes, but I digress, already..)
As you will see, I am not yet 50% complete, so there are some obvious elements missing (no Buy Damn You Buttons yet, no PPPPSs, et.) The sales video will be expanded and WON'T be on YouTube (probably AMZ S3)
I suppose what I am most interested in hearing second opinions about, would be concerning the "letter" portion of the page and the following section, where I went in a different direction. Rather than going with the typical checklist, I did something a bit different. I like it, but I'm thinking, well, this could really blow air, and I'm too close to the forest to see those Maples and Oaks.
So, anyone that would take the time to have a look and give me an opinion would be appreciated. Overall, I'm happy with what I have thus far, but am open to advice, and I have a thick skin.
Here's the URL: TrafficTorrent
Thanks in advance,
Greg
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