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Which Headline is better for mass appeal?

by MindReality
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Hi,

Which headline do you think is better for mass appeal?

Headline one:

"Discover The Greatest Secrets Of The Mind And Reality That Will Get You Anything You Desire, Almost Like Magic!"

Headline two:

"Finally Discover All The Secrets of Life And The Universe Found On This Website To Get Everything You Ever Wanted!"

Any comments and suggestions are welcomed!
#appeal #headline #mass
  • Profile picture of the author Ross Dalangin
    "Discover The Greatest Secrets Of Life That Will Get You Anything You Desire, Almost Like Magic!"

    So the nearest I like is the first one.

    Ross
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    • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
      Both of thesew headlines are pretty unbelievable. "Get Anything You Ever Wanted?" Do you think people are going to take that seriously?
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      • Profile picture of the author MindReality
        How about this one:

        Headline 3:

        "Discover The Hidden Secret Knowledge and Real Science of Attracting All the Wealth, Success and Happiness You Ever Wanted Beyond Your Wildest Dreams!"

        Would this work better than the first two?
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  • Profile picture of the author colmodwyer
    If you're aiming for "mass appeal," you'll be lucky to get any appeal at all.

    Colm
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    • Profile picture of the author MindReality
      Please consider headline 3 as well which I posted above.

      Any suggestions about what would be an appealing headline to sell a mind power/self-help/law of attraction information product?

      Show me what would be an appealing headline with your talents. Thank you.
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      • Profile picture of the author MindReality
        How about...

        "Discover How To Create Huge Success and Prosperity In All Areas of Life With These Powerful Secrets!"

        Is this headline much better?
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  • Profile picture of the author Topgunb
    Hi

    I would combine the two

    Discover the secret to getting everything you ever wanted!

    It is short, powerful, and caters to out I want it thinking.

    Brian
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  • Profile picture of the author Vin_J
    add in some proof or a case study into the headline. It needs a hook and more believability
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    • Profile picture of the author Andy LaPointe
      As mentioned in any earlier post, it depends on your target market.

      If I read the following heading

      "Discover How To Create Huge Success and Prosperity In All Areas of Life With These Powerful Secrets!"

      When I read that I would expect to achieve prosperity in all areas of my life... my job, my home, my car, my family, my weight, my breath, my relationships, etc. You want to tighten up your claims so they are focused like a laser pointing at the heart of your target market.
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  • Profile picture of the author maximus242
    I think ALL of those headlines suck.

    They're all unbelievable. The claims are wayyyy bigger than you can back up anyways. You have to have MASSIVE proof to back that up.

    Go Look at Nightingale Conants copy for god sakes. You cant look at the online copy, you have to buy something and get on their list. Some of the best copywriters in the world write for them.

    Here is one of their headlines

    You know what you need to do...

    ... to be healthy ... to get organized ... to make more money
    ... to simplify your life ... or to have whatever it is you want.

    So why don't you do it?

    The answer ISN'T what you think!

    *subhead* It's not laziness, low motication or lack of will power standing between you and succes.

    Look inside for the suprising REAL REASON why you're not doing what you know you should ... and for a revolutionary approach to achievement that will put you in control of your life and enable you to reach ANY goal -- easily -- no matter what it is.

    Now THAT is good sales copy.
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    • Profile picture of the author MindReality
      Which of these two headlines is better?

      Headline 1:

      Discover All The Secrets of The Universe To Get Everything You Ever Wanted

      Headline 2:

      Discover The Most Closely Guarded Secrets To Get Everything You Desire


      Just let me know which one is better and why.
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