Critique my Video Registration Page

on a design stand-point the opt-in is below the fold... you should either get rid of the big header & make the video smaller or make the optin to the left of the video.

on a copy stand-point... I think it's quite boring and quite long for an optin page... Probably you should talk about the 7 sins or secrets whatever in the video AFTER the optin and in the opt-in video just say... "Hey I want to sent you this free video series where I tell you the 7 easy steps you can do to make your website more profitable no matter how little money it generates now." then give some credentials who you are, what you've done, how easy it is to implement these 7 steps, what percent% increase you can expect, etc. ... "I'm the founder of the Chi-Force Academy" - what name is that? I thought this was about energy and things like that...
Have more excitement in the video, take a look at how Russell Brunson (I think that's correct) does it in theviralsecret (search for the site on google, the first video is there)
Anyway, it's just morning here so maybe I've rambled incoherently...

I am still quite unclear what your offer is. Some videos that increase conversions and access to a membership site?
Probably you should word that differently.

You should probably just talk about that in the beginning - My name is alexio, I'm the founder of the Chi-Force Academy and right now I want to invite you take part of the Chi Force Academy for free. This isn't just some random opt-in where you'll get a 2 page report, this is a complete community where I will share with you videos that can boost you conversions, etc etc building a site is not enough you need to -bullets bullets bullets, etc., you will also be part of a mastermind, etc etc. (write features & benefits then a simple description why you need them and what results you can expect from them) - that's how I would do it
Get clear on what your offer is... then make it easy to understand and don't get boring... make your voice sound more enthusiastic!! if you can't do this then get someone who can.

You should use a compelling headline which tells people what's on offer - the video should then build that or explain that..cannot really call what you have a headline in my opinion - the content on top of your opt-in is pretty weak as well and can be worded better.

If I can be of help...

One might not really understand what they'll be getting. What kind of "crash training" how will that benefit me? Why is this different? Who are you and how are you qualified?
What's "Chi-Force" is that like Jui-Jitsu?

The page takes a long time to load for some reason. Would be much better with a video explaining what this is about.

Hi there

I would put the opt in on the right -thats naturally where the eyes look to

you dont want anything below the fold either

I would remove the header logo and replace it with a catchy headline. And definitely push the opt-in above the fold.

I don't know who Peter Noone, but I think he sounds cute. I'd be thinking, "oohh... I could stand to listen to this guy."

In terms of the actual words being said, it isn't really clear to me what exactly you offer either. You say something early on about learning something in the next 2 minutes..... but I don't think I did learn anything usable in the next 2 minutes.

I think you need to state your "irresistable offer" a bit more clearly. Just my 2 cents.

And in your first post you called it a "cheesy video". Don't call your efforts cheesy, unless you really think they are, in which case, why are you asking us to spend time looking at them?