What do you think of this sales letter?
I am a web designer, I created recently my own web design studio.. I was frustrated in the begining because I have sent more tha 50 emails to prospect clients to create or redesign their websites, but I didn't got any result..
so I hired a professional copywriter who wrote me this sales letter?
Can your website impress in 7 seconds? According to web research, if you haven't grabbed their attention in seven seconds, you've lost another customer, another visitor, and another chance at a profit. As a small business owner, you need a website that works - and that's where Spruce Web Studio can help. I know why you've avoided professional web design in the past: It costs too much. (You can't afford $1000+) You don't know what you need. (You're not a web designer.) You're afraid you won't like the results. (You don't know what to expect.) You're afraid to trust anyone with your website. (You think the designer will create a horrible site or make your business look like a joke.) I understand and I want to help you. I'll make it easy for you, I promise. But you NEED a website. Millions of customers look online first. Your competition is already online. A web presence is necessary to reach the global marketplace. You level the playing field. You create a connection with customers. You can showcase your expertise. A professionally designed website helps you connect with customers, anytime of the day or night, allowing you to make connections and forge new relationships. You can reach out to people around the world, allowing you to generate more sales now and in the future. Spruce Web Studio specializes in helping small businesses and individuals promote their ideas, their products, and their websites. We offer: A complete web design package for as low as 400USD Hosting and a domain name cost included for two years Six months of support Six months of site revisions 100% money back guarantee in the first 60 days. A full view of your website BEFORE you pay anything. An elegant and eye-catching website Beautiful typography Harmonious site colors What's the Catch? There's no catch. Really. I want to build a portfolio of websites and I want to help you have the best possible website. One small thing - I'm limiting this offer to the first 30 businesses or individuals that sign up, so you will need to make the decision right now whether your website is worth an upgrade. Plus, I can't do all of this work for this low price forever. So really, the only catch is to me - I'll be the one putting in the hours to redesign or design your website. If you don't like it, you don't have to pay for it. What do you have to lose except more business online? You need a high quality website and Spruce Web Studio will provide you with the best possible site for the best possible price. Don't take it personally that I'm contacting you. I noticed your site could be better and I wanted to help. Let's make your website the best it can be. YOU HAVE NOTHING TO LOSE. Thanks for your time, Hatem Talebi Spruce Web Studio spruce-ws.com |
What do you think of the letter? is there any way that I can improve it to make it work?
Thank you very much
Adam Linkenauger
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