Headlines for Self Defence Classes
Can you help me create a few headlines in the martial arts classes market? It's not a dvd program. But rather classes.
I've come up with a few headlines but I'm still suck. Here is what I came up with:
1. Here Is How Two Hours of Scintillating MMA Can Transform Your Life And Your Perceptions About Fighting Forever...
2. Discover The Sure Fire Ways To Beat The Crap Out Of Anyone In A Street Fight?
I've got more ideas. But I don't know which to prioritize in the headline.
The customers are in the 20-40 range, employed with a good salary, get pushed around at work(verbally) and sometimes physically, they don't have a social life, get drunk weekly and are becoming fatter day by day.
They are constantly stressed with having to sit for eight hours a day on the computer, they feel they aren't attractive enough/not strong enough.
They all have one desire: To be more Alpha... Alpha male.
What the classes offer:
1. Fast Weight loss
2. Training in self defence and different martial art disciplines
3. Toning their body in ways the gym wouldn't.
What do you think should I focus on the headline?
weight loss or self defence moves or fitness.
Thanks
- Jack Trout
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