Is my home page copy ok? ...
Firstly thank you for everyone who contributes. Some great advice given.
I'd really appreciate your opinions on how my home page copy is structured.
I have tried to give all the important info up front. And then under that provide more detail in a problem-solution-benefits-proof-USP-action type of structure with links to skip to each section. I'm wondering if it is still too long for other reasons though!?
I think I've already got enough items in the side menu so didn't really want to add more pages and hence more side menu items.
I'd love to hear your advice!
Plus if you had any other comments - overall site design, layout, colours etc
quitsmokingin60mins.com.au
Thank you muchly!
Kind Regards,
Steve
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