Do I suck badly at copywriting? Please have a look at this site, and tell me!
This is my first post in this particular forum, because the sort of internet marketing which requires writing "sales-y"/convincing copy (ie, affiliate marketing, CPA, the sort of thing where the end goal is to get a potential customer to do something or sign up for offers) isn't really my "thing"; I'm more of an informational content/blogging/Adsense kind of guy - I can write well, but direct selling has never been my strong point.
A little while ago I put up a one page site for a health-related affiliate product. I'd love to show it to you all (it's hardly a "top secret niche" - it's for ZetaClear fungus treatment), and would be pleased for the copywriters who excel in selling this - or any - sort of affiliate product/CPA offer to tell me what you think.
The URL is: ZetaClear Toenail Fungus Treatment: The Truth About ZetaClear
I did nothing for offpage SEO except one press release which has brought, according to my Cpanel, oh, ninety or so visitors this month; the unique CTR number is about 15 clicks. No sales.
So tell me what you think. Is my style too dry? Not demanding action well enough? If someone can point out examples of what to change or make specific suggestions, I'd love to hear them.
Thanks, Warriors!
Mark "Drez" Dresner
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