Squeeze Page Critique
(marriage green card kit ..com) from Warriors on this forum.
The consensus solution was the addition of a
squeeze page coupled with a more
personal and compelling narrative.
Very helpful info.
I plan to implement the many useful suggestions
one by one starting with the squeeze page.
I'm very interested in your thoughts on this first draft.
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Note: The opt-code is not activated yet.
Also, this is interesting...In response to some of the
Warriors who suggested I'd hire a pro copywriter
for the landing page...I did hire a professional
copywriter to write the copy (and paid a premium). Initially I was quite happy with the copy, but your critique and the dearth of sales are leading me to feel otherwise...
Thanks in advance everyone.
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