Is this heading in the right direction?

Firstly, you shoot yourself in the foot by saying "content isn't king." Really? Okay, well, I'm off to find a copywriter who values the written word.

The "regardless" paragraph... arg, I mean sentence is a bunch of different thoughts... run on sentences bad!

I only got that far because it was clear to me you really didn't know what you wanted to say.

If you want to demonstrate how you're different as a copywriter or article marketer, talk about it and yourself in the most positive, inspiring sense possible.

"Content is King! Well, copy that really connects with your audience with laser precision that is...

The immense consequence of knowing what kind of emotions you want to elicit from an article is essential.

My job is to hone in upon the core message you want to express and craft a persuasive masterpiece that creates massive conversions for you!"

Hey Jackson,

I'll start off by saying that it isn't really terrible, I've seen much worse before. I've read through it and I'll give you a few notes that may not be in any particular order:

1. Your Headlines
You have too many headlines. You should have one very captivating headline in the beginning and then use smaller subheadings. These subheadings should pique the reader's interest even if they don't read the copy. They don't have to relate directly to the copy below it. Example: "Reading Fortunes" people skimming through it might wonder what fortune telling has to do with content but it can also mean that content leads to revenue growth.

I also feel that your headlines are a bit long. The focus shouldn't really be on the headlines, it should be on the copy below them. The headline simply gets people to read the copy below it.

2. Your Sentences
Your sentences need to flow better, especially in the beginning. The aim here is to cause people to start reading the copy before they even realize it. Your sentences don't flow well because, in my opinion, they are too long. You need to write your copy so that it's aimed at someone who might not be interested in what you're selling.

Try to limit each sentence to one thought. Example: "Plenty of people try to fight off alien invaders but many of them don't use strong weapons, that's because they don't use Telsa Ray Cannons which have longer beam distance with less crystal consumption" This sentence is too long and can be a whole paragraph if it were broken down into individual thought packets.

3. Consistency
One thing I noticed is that your copy isn't consistent. What I mean is that you start your third paragraph by introducing yourself and stating your desire to be a writer for your clients. The rest of your copy seems to suggest that you hire other writers, researchers and editors. This contradicts the earlier copy and makes the reader lose trust in you.

You should either introduce yourself as running a writing firm or continue selling yourself as the sole individual writer. Either way, it needs to be consistent.

4. Insecurity
I feel that you attack your competition far too early and it makes you seem insecure. People are reading this because, hopefully, they are interested in you and your services. They aren't interested in hearing about how they've been ripped off when they don't know anything about you.

One of the most important things to remember is that no one wants to be a sucker. People will go a long way to justify their actions and purchases in order to maintain the illusion that they have made a wise decision. I don't think it's a good idea to bring up such a negative emotion in the beginning. You should be building positive emotions when you start and then use the possibility of being ripped off later, to justify the purchase.

I suppose that's about it for now. Good luck buddy.

It's not bad, but it could certainly use a bit of magic to inspire clients to hire you for their writing needs. What's in it for them? How is your writing different from the cheap writer and why?