Salescopy Critique For List Building Supremacy Please???
I'm looking for a few copywriters to critique my salescopy, I think the beginning is ok but I think ill lose people after the video descriptions.
What do you think?
Old Copy = http://listbuildingsupremacy.com/index-OLD.html
New Copy = http://listbuildingsupremacy.com/
Any advice would be greatly appreciated
Cheers
Craig
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