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need sales critique for twitter marketing product

by Wage Mills
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twitterviralcpa.com
#critique #marketing #product #sales #twitter
  • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
    Wage, we gotta read it first man...do away with that blue background and replace it with white, then come back

    Best,
    Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author adamlantelme
    Right in the beginning the copy starts off with a big bit of misinformation. Twitter is not the biggest social media site.

    Additionally, you never really get into the benefits, and your letter just dumps the offer on them at the very end, without actually providing them with any incentive to buy.

    It needs some serious work, PM if you'd like be to a rewrite, or more in depth review for you.
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  • Profile picture of the author adamlantelme
    Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post

    The next time is see an offer to turn my computer into my personal ATM machine, I'm going to puke.
    That and Cash sucking whatever.
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  • Profile picture of the author Scott Murdaugh
    Every example account on your page is suspended...
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    Over $30 Million In Marketing Data And A Decade Of Consistently Generating Breakthrough Results - Ask How My Unique Approach To Copy Typically Outsells Traditional Ads By Up To 29x Or More...

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  • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
    Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post

    The next time is see an offer to turn my computer into my personal ATM machine, I'm going to puke.
    Don't read my sig.
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