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Need critique on twitter software product

by Wage Mills
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need suggestions for this website
tweetdominator.com
#critique #product #software #twitter
  • Profile picture of the author rsseosolution
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    • Profile picture of the author Wage Mills
      Originally Posted by rsseosolution View Post

      it seems to be a cool software to me
      thanks
      so i shouldnt change anything?
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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    Originally Posted by Wage Mills View Post

    need suggestions for this website
    tweetdominator.com
    A simple 'please' will go a long way towards helping you to receive high quality copywriting critiques.

    http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...critiques.html
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  • Profile picture of the author John_S
    Traffic is nice. Conversions are better.

    Traffic only boosts your bandwidth costs. It's not the benefit the non-narcissist wants. You can get huge numbers of poorly converting traffic, that's not the point. Sales beats traffic. Profitable sales beats any sale at any cost.

    Given the twitterpated mindset, I may be talking to the wrong crowd.
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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      Originally Posted by John_S View Post

      Traffic is nice. Conversions are better.

      Traffic only boosts your bandwidth costs. It's not the benefit the non-narcissist wants. You can get huge numbers of poorly converting traffic, that's not the point. Sales beats traffic. Profitable sales beats any sale at any cost.

      Given the twitterpated mindset, I may be talking to the wrong crowd.
      And very simple 'on topic' language works best in sales copy.

      Non-narcissistic wants?

      Twitterpated mindset?

      :confused:
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  • Profile picture of the author John_S
    Okay, two simple sentences.

    Traffic is nice. Conversions are better.
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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      Originally Posted by John_S View Post

      Okay, two simple sentences.

      Traffic is nice. Conversions are better.
      Much better, thanks.
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  • Profile picture of the author Wage Mills
    uploaded a new video
    need feedback
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    • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
      Originally Posted by Wage Mills View Post

      uploaded a new video
      need feedback
      Looks good, though I wouldn't offer the "whole kitchen sink" on the sales page... leave a little bit to the imagination...

      A little mystery, goes a long way.
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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      Originally Posted by Wage Mills View Post

      uploaded a new video
      need feedback
      A kid can scream blue murder demanding this, that and the other but if they don't say please, they don't get it.

      http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...copy-here.html
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  • Profile picture of the author max5ty
    Originally Posted by Wage Mills View Post

    need suggestions for this website
    tweetdominator.com
    A couple of quick ideas:

    I'm not sure why your headline is a link - but I would make the headline much bigger.

    I would switch the video and the proof element around.

    I don't know what your resources are, but I think your video would be much more appealing if you were talking the viewer through the steps. If you're not good at speaking, you could probably find someone on fiverr that would do it for 5 bucks.

    Are you using the comment section for testimonials? If you are, I'd have someone start the ball rolling by giving you one.

    Just a couple quick thoughts - hope you do well with your sales.
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    • Profile picture of the author Wage Mills
      Originally Posted by rsseosolution View Post

      it seems to be a cool software to me
      Originally Posted by max5ty View Post

      A couple of quick ideas:

      I'm not sure why your headline is a link - but I would make the headline much bigger.

      I would switch the video and the proof element that you have around.

      I don't know what your resources are, but I think your video would be much more appealing if you were talking the viewer through the steps. If you're not good at speaking, you could probably find someone on fiverr that would do it for 5 bucks.

      Are you using the comment section for testimonials? If you are, I'd have someone start the ball rolling by giving you one.

      Just a couple quick thoughts - hope you do well with your sales.
      thanks for the feedback
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