Care To Critique My Weight Loss Salesletter - Thanks In Advance!
I am currently working on a project with a hypnotherapist friend who wants to sell her new hypnosis gastric band cd.
Now she knows that I often visit this great forum and see this as an indication that I must be fairly good at internet marketing.
To be honest I am probably one of the worst lol, however my friend knows that I have been a little broke lately and believes this could be a nice little earner for both of us.
So without another word I got started on a salespage, which leads us to where I am today.
I would like to ask you experts to please take a little look if you have any spare time and get back to me with any feedback you may have.
Now before I give you the link, i'd just like to say that the bonuses aren't the actual bonuses that'll be on the site they were just put there to give an idea of how the site would look with bonuses there.
anyhow, you can see the site so far by clicking the link below;
Gastric Hypno Band
Many thanks for your advice in advance,
Stephen Courtney.
Adam Linkenauger
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