Kindly critique the sales letter on my page please
I created a simple squeeze page based on the ideas i got on WF. The main aim of this squeeze page is to collect email address of individuals who are interested in information on "how to make a woman orgasm".
I want to request for a critique of my squeeze page and how i can improve it (the copywriting) to convert as much as possible etc
My Squeeze page
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