Bad Breath Niche - New Product - Would Welcome Feedback and Advice
My name is Dolors and I have just registered. I would be really grateful if I could get some feedback and some advice.
Last month I finished a 152 page ebook on how to cure halitosis (bad breath). Having suffered from halitosis myself for 12 years, I know very well that most (if not all) ebooks currently on the market are not the real deal (in fact, I have bought them all...)
I wanted to create a product that gave real value to the customer so have I put 9 months of my time writting it (part time). Anyway, all this is to say that I trully believe I have a product that is genuinely good, and that is not just something put there to make money, but that will really help people out.
Of course, this is worth nothing unless I can sell it! I have also spent hours learning how to do basic stuff on Photoshop and so I have created all the graphics myself. I am happy with the results so far...
However, when it comes to copywritting my sales page, I am a bit lost. The problem is that I do not have enough traffic right now to that page yet (an average of 15-20 uniques a day right now) to properly know conversion rates and do split testing.
I have tested several layouts and copy but still unsure what works best. From the sales I have made so far, I am pretty sure that emotional headlines on top and personal story on top do not work well (contrary to what I thought initially... I think it may be because they just sound a bit too scammy and people are tired of them). I find that the current layout seems to produce more sales, not sure why, but I want to improve it, so would love to hear other people´s opinions :-)
Also, I need affiliates and would also be grateful for some advice on where is the best place to find them. I will work on traffic myself, but I am no expert so will do my best by adding articles to my site and Article sites.
Not sure how to put the link to my sales page, as I have not posted enough to be allowed a link here... (EDIT): I have just noticed that you can get to my sales page by clicking over my name on the left and choosing "Visit Dolors Jou´s Homepage" :-)
Thank you very much in advance,
Dolors
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