Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
If you've a spare moment, would you mind taking a look at my "hypnotic" sales letter.
I'll warn you up front, it's long. Almost 1200 words of pure, unadulterated, Harlan Kilstein, Joe Vitale style copy.
(I left out the adjective "wannabe". It should've gone right between the words "unadulterated" and "Harlan".)
Frankly, I've never written a letter of this length and, among (many) other things I'm concerned about with the piece, I'm not sure it moves quickly enough.
While writing, my partner and I formed a few creative differences on a few issues.
(Of course, I was probably right about most things, but can't know for sure until I get feedback from reliable sources.)
Pointers and criticisms warmly welcomed.
Thanks in advance for taking the time.
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Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D.
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Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D.
Free NLP Communications Course at http://www.nlpcopywriting.com
http://overnight-copy.com
Get Fit In Four Minuteshttp://just4minutes.com
Learn how to build a Super Site Without SEO http://supersiteformula.com
Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D.
Free NLP Communications Course at http://www.nlpcopywriting.com
http://overnight-copy.com
Get Fit In Four Minuteshttp://just4minutes.com
Learn how to build a Super Site Without SEO http://supersiteformula.com
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Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D.
Free NLP Communications Course at http://www.nlpcopywriting.com
http://overnight-copy.com
Get Fit In Four Minuteshttp://just4minutes.com
Learn how to build a Super Site Without SEO http://supersiteformula.com
Publish Coloring Books for Profit (WSOTD 7-30-2015)
Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D.
Free NLP Communications Course at http://www.nlpcopywriting.com
http://overnight-copy.com
Get Fit In Four Minuteshttp://just4minutes.com
Learn how to build a Super Site Without SEO http://supersiteformula.com
Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D.
Free NLP Communications Course at http://www.nlpcopywriting.com
http://overnight-copy.com
Get Fit In Four Minuteshttp://just4minutes.com
Learn how to build a Super Site Without SEO http://supersiteformula.com
Site being revamped.
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