Does this make sense?

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For a healthy nutrition product, made of very natural ingredients I would like to have this tagline on the package:

"a mother earth purely delivery"

does this phrase make complete sense to a common English?
#make #sense #tagline or slogan
  • Profile picture of the author butter1
    Nope lol... stick to something a bit more simple
    this makes more sense: 'An amazing delivery from mother nature'
    source: i'm from england
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  • Profile picture of the author John_S
    "a mother earth purely delivery"

    Sounds like English is not your first language.
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    • Profile picture of the author michalis
      Originally Posted by John_S View Post

      "a mother earth purely delivery"

      Sounds like English is not your first language.
      yeap its not. thats why i am asking you
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  • Profile picture of the author nagendrabandi1980
    "a mother earth purely delivery" is not looking that good as you are not native English speaker that bound to happen. You need to generate phrase that strikes to anyone mind very quickly, all the best.
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  • Profile picture of the author Arock
    It does not make any sense. Maybe something like:

    Mother Earth. Purely Delivered. (still, doesn't really make much sense though)...
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  • Profile picture of the author michalis
    Thank you all for your replies. Finally, I tend to prefer mother nature than mother earth, so I will work upon it. Thanx again!
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  • Profile picture of the author rkat55
    Nutrition As Pure and Wholesome As Mother Nature

    Nutrition Delivered by Mother Nature - Pure and Natural
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    • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
      "Provided Purely by Mother Nature"... would work.
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