I need a critique of my first example copywriting.
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- Owe a friend for gas?
- Need to get a gift?
- Want that game console tomorrow?
- Need that thank you bouquet for the co worker tomorrow?
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End of example.
Please critique. I didn't add product as no such product exists. I just wanted to see if this was the Sizzle, or the steak part.
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