What do you think of these headlines?
I am still studying on how to create good, eye catchy and effective headlines.
I will be making some banners for a particular site.
Now, please give me your honest thoughts about these headlines that I have just created:
1)
How would you like Protecting And Educating Your Children Online
& Earning Money At The Same Time?
2)
You Can Now Protect And Educate Your Children Online And On Top Of That, You Can Earn As Well.
3)
Who Else Wants To Know How To Protect And Educate Children Online And Earn Money At The Same Time?
Am I doing the right thing? For these 3 headlines, which one do you think is better. Or these headlines are not appealing at all.
I have also a more specific one headline:
Finally! You Can Now Start Your Own Online Kids Club To Protect And Educate Kids Online and Make $$!
You may rephrase or rewords my headlines if it's okay with you.
Any information you may provide will be highly appreciated.
Thanks,
Louie
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