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Need help to review a 1,000 words text

by stephabel
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Being French I sometimes write awkward sentences but I never had any major trouble with it, except some people had a good laugh at me on occasions.

I have written my first three articles for ezinearticles and I would appreciate if anyone could just reread - not correct - and point out anything what would get my articles rejected for "poor English". After I am accepted on ezeinearticles I feel comfortable to write further articles on my own - or outsource if I'm really too bad for this exercise.

The three articles are in a single text file on my server. So it's just a matter of reading the web page and telling me if this would go.

Of course I will return the service. I am good at proofreading, but don't ask me to rewrite your stuff as it would be a bad deal for you. Or if you prefer and have the use for it I can write an original article just for you in the same niche, yours to keep - a kind of PLR - 100% original of course. My three articles returned a 0% Google+Yahoo on articlechecker and copyscape

Thanks in advance for your help. It will be appreciated.
#review #text #words
  • Profile picture of the author OnlineWriter
    I'll look these over for you. I have some free time haha.
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    • Profile picture of the author stephabel
      Originally Posted by OnlineWriter View Post

      I'll look these over for you. I have some free time haha.
      OnLineWriter,

      Thanks very much for the fantastic job you have done in reviewing my articles. You did much more than "looking these over". You made these articles immediately publishable although my original versions were not. But I just hope you didn't do this out of frustration...

      What you pointed out was kind of what I expected. Same errors that I know I am constantly doing and that I see foreigners doing also. Here a verb instead of an adjective, there an adjective instead of an adverb a.s.o.

      With about 5% changes in critical sentences, the improvement is phenomenal and I took note that although my writing is good enough for forums, it is probably best to get my articles checked before publishing them in ezine or I am going to loose my time and energy.

      For you who read this thread you may want to look at hiring Onlinewriter if you need writing services.

      His "free time" "looking over" will make a huge difference for me.
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      • Profile picture of the author OnlineWriter
        Just glad to help!

        If you need more checked out, just let me know.
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