Critique Non Profit Sales Page?
As a worthless piece of garbage copywriter, I have produced a page (and a website actually) for a non profit who badly needs help. (They train service dogs to give to veterans and kids with severe emotional, physical and psychological challenges)
They can run a legal 501(C)(3) raffle, so I created a story line, made a video (all true BTW) and a sales page.
We have a google grant (only lets us bid $1) and we have sent about 85 people to the site with no conversions.
Here is my ask.
First is there anyone interested in donating time to help? Got no money. - yet. If I can make this work I can create enough income for payment. Not crazy payment but payment.
Or - can I have some ideas on how to go about this - how you would do it differently?
I could write the story line here but it might be easier to watch the video.
I know we are all busy - but I can tell you (after a year of doing it) - that there is a perverse pleasure in working for nothing knowing you are working for nothing!
(Not that any of us are working for nothing. )
Thanks for any help. And please don't hesitate to email or skype if you have questions.
Regards,
Miami
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Mark Andrews Banned-
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