Any thoughts on this message

Hello and thank you for your time warriors. I was writing a solo ad message which I would like to use. However I want to know your thoughts first on this message. Mainly do you think it will convert at a good rate and what changes you think I should make. Remember it is going to be a solo and my subscribers are never going to see it on my list except for before they signup. Thank you everyone for your time and your thoughts here is the message below minus the links Which I am going to strategically place later.


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Hi,

These past few weeks have been rather exciting. A couple of weeks ago I received an email much like you are now. What was in this email was a complete shock to me. For it was claiming that it had a free way to drive endless floods of traffic to my sites absolutely free.

I was much like you sitting there thinking yea this can not possibly be true by any means but I figured why not give it a try since I had nothing to lose and everything to gain. So I went to the page that was offering this free traffic report. So I signed up and received my free report as promised. After a few hours of digesting the report. I started to see the first bits of free traffic.

It didn't take long to implement most of the strategies that where mentioned there but the results where beyond phenomenal. The site I did this on was a newer site that only got a few hundred visitors a month. Now just a few weeks later it is getting a few hundred visitors a day and increasing every single day.

It has also helped bring in thousands of visitors coming from search engines. Just from using these techniques I have gone from zero to hero and you can to. Just go pick up the report and implement a few of the techniques from the start. I promise you will start to see results in just a few days and or hours.

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