Please would you critique my copy attempt.
If there are any experienced copywriters that could spare a moment to look over my copy and provide some constructive criticism, I would be most grateful.
I have thrown down lots of text in my time but this is the first time I have written with a goal in mind. (Sales).
Please go easy on me, it's my first time but I want to learn.
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ps. I am going to get the header re-designed. I know it is ugly.
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