Interesting Split Tests Result
They each contained a sales letter.
One Had THIS Headline:
"Give Me 60 Minutes 1-On-1 Over the Phone and I'll Solve Your Biggest, Hardest, and Most 'Frustrating' Marketing Problem... PLUS I'll Give You a Brilliant 'Marketing Package' Worth $597.00 TOTALLY FREE OF CHARGE..."
The Other Had THIS Headline:
Amazing secret exposed: why your website
isn't driving sales and what to do about it..."
Now here's the thing... I wrote the first one and a leading Australian copywriter suggested the second.
The body copy in each mail out was identical. We are selling websites to the offline market.
The first one is kicking butt. I mean 'dancing a jig' Chris-is-one-happy-young-man-well
The second, so far, has not resulted in even a single call.
Anyway, I have heard heaps lately about how "People Just Don't Read Long Headlines Anymore..." Yada yada yada.
My experience is quite the opposite. In fact I'd go so far as to say that the ONLY place short headlines work is in Classified Ads.
What has your experience been?
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