Creating a script for a video. Whadaya think?
Anyways, here is the script. It will go along with the video. Let me know what you think! And if you want to make any revisions to make it better, go ahead and do so!
Thank you so much!
This is Joe's Pizza Buffet and this is Joe. Like most businesses on a Tuesday morning, Joe's is fairly slow. In fact, Joe actually lost money in the last hour because of labor costs. Joe has no idea why it's so slow because Sunday he began a promotion where customers could come in and get the all you can eat buffet for only $5.49, including a drink. He even put an ad out in the local newspaper and no one seems to be interested. Well, Joe, it's not that people are not interested. You're just not getting the exposure that you need to make this sale successful. Unfortunately, not many people actually buy the newspaper to see the advertisements. Studies have shown that the majority of people who buy a newspaper only read stories featured on the front page. It seems as though a radio ad would be obsolete, as well, considering the number of iPods, CD players, and sattellite radio's being used in vehicles and homes these days. Furthermore; who listens to radio commercials anymore? Most people tend to switch the channel when a commercial comes on. So how can a local business like Joe's reach thousands of local consumers almost instantly and create a landslide of revenue? Enticem Marketing has a solution. With Enticem's new mobile marketing services, businesses can reach hundreds or even thousands of local consumers to inform them of a sale, offer, promotion or event by sending out a mass text message that will go directly to the consumer's cell phones. What makes this service so effective is that consumers manually subscribe to our local deals club in order to receive offers from businesses in the area. So whenever a business wants to create an instant spike in sales, they can do so by contacting all of our subscribers via text with an irresistable and limited-time sale. People naturally love saving money; it's a fact. They just can't resist a bargain. Contact an Enticem representative for more information on how you can get a free trial of our service and create a stampede of customers to your establishment today. |