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Report Title-Help please

by Mark Rayment
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Hi
I have a report that I am giving away on a capture page on Social Media. It is aimed at offline business. The focus is on why off line business should be using Social Media. I want to have a title that really grabs the prospects attention. Any suggestions please
thanks
Mark
#report #titlehelp
  • Profile picture of the author Jake Dennert
    Originally Posted by Mark Rayment View Post

    I want to have a title that really grabs the prospects attention. Any suggestions please
    thanks
    Mark
    Hmmm...

    ...don't really have all that much to work with here, Mark... but I'll try.

    ====================================

    Headline - Social Profits

    Subheadline - It Pays To Be Friendly

    ====================================

    Headline - Has Your Business 'Gone Social' Yet?

    Subheadline - If Not, You're Already Behind...

    ====================================

    Headline - With More Than Half A Billion Users, Your Customers ARE On Facebook...

    Subheadline - ...So Why Aren't You?

    ====================================

    Not exactly sure what you're covering in your report (Twitter, FB, etc)...

    ...but that's what I could come up with off the top of my head.

    If I saw what you were discussing in your report, or knew more about your target audience (specifics, not just 'offline businesses'...) I could do better.


    Jake
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Rayment
      Originally Posted by Jake Dennert View Post

      Hmmm...

      ...don't really have all that much to work with here, Mark... but I'll try.

      ====================================

      Headline - Social Profits

      Subheadline - It Pays To Be Friendly

      ====================================

      Headline - Has Your Business 'Gone Social' Yet?

      Subheadline - If Not, You're Already Behind...

      ====================================

      Headline - With More Than Half A Billion Users, Your Customers ARE On Facebook...

      Subheadline - ...So Why Aren't You?

      ====================================

      Not exactly sure what you're covering in your report (Twitter, FB, etc)...

      ...but that's what I could come up with off the top of my head.

      If I saw what you were discussing in your report, or knew more about your target audience (specifics, not just 'offline businesses'...) I could do better.


      Jake
      Hi Jake
      thank-you I really like this one :

      Headline - Has Your Business 'Gone Social' Yet?

      Subheadline - If Not, You're Already Behind...

      The report is an overview with some facts about business using social media and then discusses the 3 platforms of Twitter,Facebook and LinkedIn. It really is for list building.
      thanks for your ideas
      Mark
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      • Profile picture of the author Jake Dennert
        Originally Posted by Mark Rayment View Post

        thanks for your ideas
        No problem at all, Mark.

        Anytime.


        Jake
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