NEW Opt-In Page Copy... What Are Your Thoughts?
Ok so my Opt-in rate isn't at the level I want it, so before I take down the one I have... I thought I'd run my new one by you guys. Everyone here is just so awesome, I wouldn't even think about putting a new one up before I got some "ok's" or "pretty goods" from you guys.
So here it is in all it's glory....
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[PICTURE OF ME LOOKING RIPPED]
I have a serious question to ask you...
How can I be so sure about all of this? Because I have a system that is proven. It's proven on me and on others who were just like you, so I know it works!
Just see for yourself, the picture you see up there is actually me, not some fitness model I hired to make my website look good.
All it takes, is for you to take that leap of faith... And why wouldn't you? My Fitness Report has helped thousands of others start their journey to a better body, and luckily for you, that report is currently yours for FREE. (Usually goes for $9.99)
What's inside the report?
Well you're about to find out!
Why Am I Giving It Away?
Because I can!
Because I know you need it!
Because I want to make this world a more attractive place...
Whatever reason... Take your pick. The fact is that as of right now, you can grab it for free, so let's not waste each others time and get to the point. Fill out the information below, and you'll have download access to it immediately.
But do it quickly because as you can see, this offer won't last for long, so please don't complain when you come back and you see a price tag attached to it...
^^ To Encourage Instant Action
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The two main pieces of feedback that I'd like...
Would you plunk down your email to see what it's all about? (yes/no)
What changes would you make...
And then on top of that... whatever you feel needs to be said.. say it.
Thanks guys.
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