Headline Angst
Headline: Making Algae Biodiesel at Home: Discover How To Make Money With Algae
Subhead: How To Make Algae Biodiesel...Make it Better, Make it Cheaper, Make it Yourself.
Demographic: engineers, DIY's, entrepreneurs, teachers, etc.
My own test have shown, if I get to "salesy" it doesn't work. If I put too many superlatives, (Amazing, Great, etc) it doesn't work. I tested using time frames (in 3 months) it didn't make much difference. I tested using the word "Guarantee" that didn't make any difference either.
Can anyone think of a stronger, more forceful, headline?
Thanks in advance.
David Sieg
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.
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Save Time, Save Money, Save the Planet
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Save Time, Save Money, Save the Planet
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Direct Response Copywriting
Direct Response Copywriting
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Direct Response Copywriting
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