F*** it: Would you mind reviewing my homepage copy? (I'll even do ya a favor.)
I'm a little sensitive when it comes to my writing. It feels personal when (qualified) people criticize it.
A few months ago, I wrote a radio ad for a grocery store. The marketing director thought it was too much like another company's campaign and told me to rewrite it.
I wanted to punch a hole in my computer screen. And cry. At the same time. (I did neither.)
But I know I need a thick skin to make it as a copywriter.
So I figured what better place to get a thorough critique of my work than the Warrior Copywriting Forum? Toughen me up a bit, I figure.
So you would be doing me a solid if you took a look at my homepage copy. Tell me what I'm doing right, what sucks...and so on.
The copy definitely ain't perfect. And I'm having a graphic designer friend of mine redesign my website, so the layout is going to change eventually.
In return for the critique, you can ask me a favor. Proofread some stuff. Write some stuff. Promote some stuff. Whatevs.
You're probably saying, "Whoop-dee-freakin'-doo. I don't need nothin' from a newb."
And you're probably right. But I'm throwing out the offer, anyway.
Here is my site: w w w. nick nordstrom . c o m
No spaces, obviously.
Thanks in advance.
- Jack Trout
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