Squeeze Page Slogans
Hi all,
I am a little bit of a newbie when it comes to captivating copy writing.
I am about to order a Squeeze page (similar to design below) and thinking about the most effective text to make people opt in.
Could you provide feedback on the following options and how I could tweak them?
Title: The Home Hustler
Catch Line 1: Discover what I do to generate $20,000 a month in income.
Catch Line 2: From $50 to Lambo Owner in 200 Days!
(200 days might be too long to the 'instant gratification' buyers....but I don't want to be unrealistic)
Catch Line 3: Discover my Secret to Making a Living Hustling - It's not rocket science!!
"Essentially I want people to use this form to opt in to finding out WHAT I did. Then once they read WHAT I did, I up sell them to finding out HOW I did it."
It's not a hands free method, its Full time stressful work. But I don't really want to emphasis that do I!
The target is the younger demographic who don't mind getting their hands dirty and are willing to slightly lower their moral standards to make a profit. You will get told to "F#$k off" daily with the technique in the book.
Maybe Split-Testing is best with different headlines. Whats a good way to set this up?
Any suggestions to more captivating catch lines is appreciated
URL For Design Reference:
http://myminiwebsites.com/mmw/images...ts-squeeze.jpg
I am a little bit of a newbie when it comes to captivating copy writing.
I am about to order a Squeeze page (similar to design below) and thinking about the most effective text to make people opt in.
Could you provide feedback on the following options and how I could tweak them?
Title: The Home Hustler
Catch Line 1: Discover what I do to generate $20,000 a month in income.
Catch Line 2: From $50 to Lambo Owner in 200 Days!
(200 days might be too long to the 'instant gratification' buyers....but I don't want to be unrealistic)
Catch Line 3: Discover my Secret to Making a Living Hustling - It's not rocket science!!
"Essentially I want people to use this form to opt in to finding out WHAT I did. Then once they read WHAT I did, I up sell them to finding out HOW I did it."
It's not a hands free method, its Full time stressful work. But I don't really want to emphasis that do I!
The target is the younger demographic who don't mind getting their hands dirty and are willing to slightly lower their moral standards to make a profit. You will get told to "F#$k off" daily with the technique in the book.
Maybe Split-Testing is best with different headlines. Whats a good way to set this up?
Any suggestions to more captivating catch lines is appreciated
URL For Design Reference:
http://myminiwebsites.com/mmw/images...ts-squeeze.jpg
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