15 Effective Copywriting Formulas

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Courtesy of Dean Rieck of Copywriting Tips for Smart Copywriters - Pro Copy Tips:

AIDA -- This is the best-known copywriting formula of all time. It stands for Attention, Interest, Desire, Action. Every successful promotional message must attract Attention, arouse Interest, stimulate Desire, and present a compelling call for Action.

ACCA -- Awareness, Comprehension, Conviction, Action. This is similar to AIDA, but "Comprehension" stresses the importance of clarity and understanding, which is vital for any persuasive message. Also, "Conviction" is much stronger than "Desire." It suggests certainty.

Attention-Interest-Description-Persuasion-Proof-Close -- This is another AIDA variation by Robert Collier. Intended for sales letters, it outlines what he thought was the correct sales sequence.

Interest-Desire-Conviction-Action -- Yet another AIDA variation, this one from Earle A. Buckley.

AAPPA -- The eminent Victor O. Schwab suggested this commonsense and clear formula. Get Attention. Show people an Advantage. Prove it. Persuade people to grasp this advantage. Ask for action.

AIU -- This is my own formula for envelopes. It stands for Attention, Interest, Urgency. Something about an envelope must get your Attention, whether it's teaser copy, graphics, or just blank paper. This should lead to Interest in the contests and Urgency to open the envelope immediately.

PPPP -- This is a formula by Henry Hoke, Sr. It stands for Picture, Promise, Prove, Push. In many ways, it's easier to implement than AIDA because it shows you four specific tasks you must perform to make a sale. Picture: Get attention early and create a desire. Promise: Make a meaningful promise, describe benefits and what the item will do. Prove: Demonstrate the value and support your promise with testimonials. Push: Ask for the order.

Star-Chain-Hook -- This is Frank Dignan's charming and surprisingly fresh way to approach an advertising message. Hitch your wagon to a Star with an attention-getting opening that is positive and upbeat. Create a Chain of convincing facts, benefits, and reasons and transform attention into interest and interest into desire. Then, Hook them with a powerful call to action, making it easy to respond.

ABC Checklist -- William Steinhardt's formula is more detailed than most and very practical. Attain Attention, Bang out Benefits, Create verbal pictures, Describe success incidents, Endorse with testimonials, Feature special details, Gild with values, Honor claims with guarantees, Inject action in reader, Jell with postscript.

The String of Pearls -- This is a particular method of writing copy. The idea is that you assemble details and string them together in a long line, one after another. Each "pearl" is complete in some way, but when you string them together, their persuasive power becomes overwhelming.

The Cluster of Diamonds -- Similar to the String of Pearls, this formula suggests assembling a group of details under an umbrella concept. For example, an ad might have the headline "7 Reasons Why You'll Save Money With XYZ." The copy would then list these 7 reasons. Each detail is like a "diamond" in a gold setting.

The Fan Dancer -- The analogy here is perfect, though a bit racy. The idea is to tantalize with specific details that never reveal any actual information. It's like teaser copy or what one influential writer called "fascinations." For example, let's say you're selling a book on reducing your taxes. Part of your copy might read: "The one secret way to pay zero taxes and get away with it -- page 32. How the IRS uses your mailing label against you -- page 122. Three clever ways to turn a vacation into a business tax deduction even if you don't own a business -- page 158." As with a fan dancer, you're left wanting more.

The Five-Point Formula - Jack Lacy offers this guideline often used for sales letters:
1. What will you do for me if I listen to your story?
2. How are you going to do this?
3. Who is responsible for the promises you make?
4. Who have you done this for?
5. What will it cost me?


The Nine-Point Formula -- A detailed sales letter formula from Frank Egner:
1. Start with a headline (or first paragraph) to get attention and arouse desire.
2. Follow with an inspirational lead.
3. Give a clear definition of the product.
4. Tell a success story about the product.
5. Include testimonials and endorsements.
6. List special features.
7. Present a statement of value to the prospect.
8. Use specific and urgent action copy.
9. End with a postscript.



The Seven-Step Formula -- This gem from Bob Stone is primarily for sales letters:
1. Promise your most important benefit in your headline or first paragraph.
2. Immediately enlarge upon your most important benefit.
3. Tell the reader specifically what he or she is going to get.
4. Back up your statements with proof and endorsements.
5. Tell the reader what might be lost if he or she doesn't act.
6. Rephrase your prominent benefits in your closing.
7. Incite immediate action.
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  • Thanks Rick,

    Here’s another one for the collection from Brian Keith Voiles.


    A -Attention – Biggest benefit, biggest problem you can solve, USP

    I - Interest – Reason why they should be interested in what you have to say

    C -Credibility – Reason why they should believe you

    P - Prove – Prove what you are claiming is true

    B - Benefits – List them all (use bullets)

    S - Scarcity – Create scarcity

    A - Action – Tell them precisely what to do

    W -Warn – What will happen if they don’t take action

    N- Now – Motivate them to take action now


    I would also add a P.S at the end - usually re-stating the major benefit.


    Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author bankableResults
    Here´s two other formulas:

    SSS: Start. Story. Solution.

    The star is the main character in your copy. It could be you, a celebrity, a customer or what have you.

    The story: talks about how the "STAR" went through the same problem as your market does right now.

    Solution: Demonstrates how the star used your product/service to solve this problem.

    A great demonstration of this formula can be seen in Gary Halberts ad "The amazing diet secret of a desperate housewife".

    A word of warning: When you use this formula, make sure you don´t make the same mistake that John Caples did in his famous ad "They Laughed When I Sat Down At the Piano... But When I started To Play."

    Where he talks about how a fictional character (who never existed) used his product to learn how to play the piano and get approval.

    PAS: Problem. Aggravate. Solve.
    1. Start by talking about a particular problem your market has right now (enter the conversation already in his head).

    2. Intensify the consequences of this problem (create a desire for the solution).

    3. Show the reader how, and why your particular product solves their problem (channel the demand onto your product).

    Merry Christmas.

    //Sara
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  • Profile picture of the author max5ty
    Good tips.

    A lot use the S.H.I.T. method.

    Slap something together
    Hope
    It
    Takes off

    When it doesn't, it's usually always followed by the B.I.T.C.H. method.

    Boy
    It's
    Tough
    Copywriting...
    Help!

    What I'm trying to say is just because you think you're a whiz with words...doesn't mean you can put together a winning sales piece.

    Hire someone...you'll be enjoying the good life.

    There are a lot of good copywriters who are offering specials.

    Thing is, if a good copywriter takes your project, they'll usually also offer valuable marketing advice.

    Just felt like a little rant today

    Thanks for the post.
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  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Warriors
    This is great.

    One thing I noticed is that a lot of them are basically just expanding on AIDA.

    For example,

    The Nine-Point Formula — A detailed sales letter formula from Frank Egner:
    1. Start with a headline (or first paragraph) to get attention and arouse desire.
    2. Follow with an inspirational lead.
    3. Give a clear definition of the product.
    4. Tell a success story about the product.
    5. Include testimonials and endorsements.
    6. List special features.
    7. Present a statement of value to the prospect.
    8. Use specific and urgent action copy.
    9. End with a postscript.
    point 1 is attention, points 2-3 is interest, points 4-7 are desire, and point 8 is a call to action.

    Of course, that is good, because the classic AIDA formula is kind of vague, so this fleshes it out. What I might do is use some of these points to expand the idea of AIDA for future reference. Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author AngieDixon
    Thanks. I haven't seen some of these. Printing this out for my files!

    Angie
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  • Profile picture of the author abugah
    Thank you. This is a great resource.
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  • Profile picture of the author tubes00
    THanks a lot Rick listing out the copywriting formula. I'll give me a chance to bookmark this thread, and go back to it when needed.
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  • Profile picture of the author KuanYew
    thanks guys, I'm so gonna bookmark this for my own referreence, awesome!
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  • Profile picture of the author ashleysmith12
    hi
    thanks to all nice thread with valuable information, keep posting the good information.
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  • Profile picture of the author Aesop87
    These are going into Evernote. Thanks everyone!
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  • Profile picture of the author Matt Baker
    Thanks for sharing.. I would love to share this to my article writers
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  • Profile picture of the author sonu703
    thanks. do you guys mind if i use them in my blog?
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    • Profile picture of the author talfighel
      Originally Posted by sonu703 View Post

      thanks. do you guys mind if i use them in my blog?
      I don't see why you can't use this on your blog. I don't think it is copyright.
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      • Profile picture of the author Len Bailey
        Originally Posted by talfighel View Post

        I don't see why you can't use this on your blog. I don't think it is copyright.
        Works become copyrighted the moment they're written down. (Doesn't matter if they're published or not.) So using it without permission is plagiarism.

        That said, I'd be surprised if Rick and the rest would object so long as they're given due credit. But get permission FIRST.
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  • Profile picture of the author mihovi
    Excellent !
    I couldn't find anything better than this on the subject.
    Well done!
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  • Profile picture of the author Marc Rodill
    I like this from Halbert:

    1. Say something that gets attention.
    2. Tell them why they should be interested. (Expand on CSI)
    3. Tell them why they should believe what you are saying is true.
    4. Prove it is true.
    5. Itemize and describe all benefits.
    6. Tell them how to order.
    7. Tell them to order now.

    Nice and easy. But I still like to over-complicate it, of course.
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  • Profile picture of the author brute77
    I just wanted to share this, though I've moved on from Copywriting.. but have used my version of Frank Kern's formula with great success

    A + (ID X 3) + (B/T//P/S) + DG

    A - Grab attention

    ID - Generate interest and desire

    B - Bonding & belonging

    T - establish trust

    P - Proofs

    S - Samples

    DG - Death Grip (IC + OT + S)
    IC - increased coolness/value
    OT - show outside threat
    S - Scarcity

    G - Guarantee

    Hope this helps too...
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  • Profile picture of the author Len Bailey
    Good collection. Much better than the "Throw crap at the wall and pray" method I've seen so much of lately...

    Oops -- Looks like max5ty already covered that one!
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  • Profile picture of the author Leadsupply
    Nice and helpful post. I hope new comers will learn a lot from your post. Thanks a lot for sharing such a useful post.
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