13 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}
13 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}

help me to send 1st email to my list

by TheKing
11 replies
from morning i keep on writing and keep on deleting those lines ...after writing i feels tht it aint gona convert well .. so after trying hours and hours i am still confused about what to write .. may be this is my first time sending email to my list that's y

Brief :
i wrote a free short e-book about 5 money making methods & uploaded it to website .. wrote a few lines about whats inside that ebook & added in my wordpress page

now the thing is i want to send email to my list with url to wordpress page nd pretty confused what to send :confused::confused::confused:

Edit -- Below is what i wrote
this is nt a spam or to promote any offer , after earning 2 much from these methods , I want to share it wid you ... these all r white hat methods ,, i uploaded a .PDF file for you & you can download it from this page
#1st #email #list #send
  • Profile picture of the author Gerard Mohamed
    You do not seem to be clear in your request.

    Sending an email to your list with a link to your wordpress site sounds very straight forward and simple to me. Why should you have difficulty with it?
    Signature

    Gerard.

    USABizLeads - The Most Affordable USA B2B Business Leads Database
    https://usabizleads.com

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5377755].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author abugah
    Provide what you've written-however bad you think it is. People can help you improve it or rewrite it.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5377840].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author nadia712
      Originally Posted by abugah View Post

      Provide what you've written-however bad you think it is. People can help you improve it or rewrite it.
      I agree. We can't help you nearly as well if you don't tell us what you're working with.

      Here are a couple of ideas off the top of my head, though:

      Maybe your message should just explain the results people can achieve from the information in the report you've written, and let your list know that you've written it exclusively for them because you care about their success.

      Also mention that you're available to help them out if they need it. You could maybe even say that the report will be up for a limited time only (but make good on this if you say it - don't just say it to say it).

      Up to you, but hope I've helped with some guidelines, at least!
      Signature
      [FREE - Productivity Explosion Series] - Skyrocket Your Productivity and Get More Done in Less Time

      Dominate Google with My Help! - Unbelievably Powerful Link Packages via SEnuke X
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5377861].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author TheKing
      Here is what i have written so far

      this is nt a spam or to promote any offer , after earning 2 much from these methods , I want to share it wid you ... these all r white hat methods ,, i uploaded a .PDF file for you & you can download it from this page LINK TO WORDPRESS PAGE WILL COME HERE


      Originally Posted by abugah View Post

      Provide what you've written-however bad you think it is. People can help you improve it or rewrite it.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5377864].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Jason Kanigan
    So you have a list already?

    How familiar are the list members with you? If you have an established relationship then it will be easier.

    Otherwise, an email campaign with a storyline will work best. At first you don't try to sell anything. You begin by laying out a problem that your target market experiences...which you also have experienced. Give some valuable information in the first couple of emails and continue your story. Write them with cliffhanger endings.

    Share the things that embarrassed, upset and even failed for you in the process of finding out the solution to your problem. People will empathize with these emotional "confessions" and you will get a lot of credibility from sharing.

    Then in the last email you can say "I've developed the solution!" and offer it for sale.

    Lee McIntyre calls this the "secret whisper" method.
    Signature
    >> How To Grow Your Online Business [FREE Training Video, No Opt-In, from 10+ Year Vet]

    >> For Agency Founders: The Fast Shortcut To Selling SEO, Leadgen, Webdesign & Other Services
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5378934].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author BurntOut254
    Just clean up your English and what you have written is a good start.

    "This isn't a sp*m or a promotion. I know you don't know me well yet, but I just wanted to share something valuable with you today.

    I have been using something to make m0ney online. These all are white hat methods. I uploaded a .PDF file for you & you can download it from this page:



    It's my pleasure to help you make money online.

    Punjabi

    P.S. Feel free to email me if you need help making m0ney online.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5380626].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author ASCW
    Hey punjabi, I'm sure you mean well - but from what you've provided here. I really don't think your English or your writing skills are up to the task.
    I really, really think you should consider hiring somebody here on the forum to write your emails for you.
    -Andy
    Signature

    Site being revamped.

    If you want help with copy stuff, pm me.

    Cool.

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5381044].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author perryny
      Originally Posted by ASCW View Post

      I really, really think you should consider hiring somebody here on the forum to write your emails for you.
      Punjabi,

      I really, really don't think you should hire anyone to write your emails for you.

      Listen, man. You've tried this a couple of times already and it didn't work out, right?

      It's not because you're not presenting your product the right way. It's because you don't have a product that people will buy.

      You're trying to sell an e-book that tells people how to make money in IM.

      Why would ANYONE buy your e-book when there are literally hundreds of other people in the exact same place as you selling similar information?

      Many of these people show proof that their methods work. Where's your proof? Why should anyone believe that the information you're selling will work for them - especially when they can view your past posts as recently as a couple of months ago, and see that you haven't figured out how to make money in IM yourself?

      If you really want to succeed at this, take the methods in your e-book and make some real money using those methods.

      Once you achieve that, you'll have something to teach someone else. Even if no one wants to learn from you, at least you'll still be making all that money from those methods you already know.

      If I'm missing something, let me know.

      Good luck,
      -Rob
      Signature
      End procrastination with this simple project time tracker.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5381841].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author nadia712
    Hey Punjabi,

    You PMed me and requested that I add some more to your thread, so I'm doing so.

    People have already said the majority of what I was going to, so I'll just say this.. You sent me the link you were going to put at the end of your email, and it's a squeeze page requiring an opt-in before the report you're offering can be sent to whoever wants it.

    If this is the first message you're writing to your list, you shouldn't require them to opt in again. The type of message you seem to be writing is one to people who are not yet subscribed to your list. Maybe you should clarify before we continue?

    However, yeah, don't say you've made money from something you haven't yet (I'm not saying you are, but the above post indicates that you might be) - you're not doing yourself or your subscribers-to-be any favours by doing so. There are lots of valuable things you can offer in exchange for opt-ins that are not methods, per se.

    Good luck!

    -Nadia
    Signature
    [FREE - Productivity Explosion Series] - Skyrocket Your Productivity and Get More Done in Less Time

    Dominate Google with My Help! - Unbelievably Powerful Link Packages via SEnuke X
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5385083].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author TheKing
      Hello Nadia

      Thanks for your reply....
      Let me clarify here ... Actually I am buying solo ads & want some catchy email to send to other user list.

      I am not selling my own method ,, I am promoting money making ebook of a reputable guy whose methods really work


      Originally Posted by nadia712 View Post

      Hey Punjabi,

      You PMed me and requested that I add some more to your thread, so I'm doing so.

      People have already said the majority of what I was going to, so I'll just say this.. You sent me the link you were going to put at the end of your email, and it's a squeeze page requiring an opt-in before the report you're offering can be sent to whoever wants it.

      If this is the first message you're writing to your list, you shouldn't require them to opt in again. The type of message you seem to be writing is one to people who are not yet subscribed to your list. Maybe you should clarify before we continue?

      However, yeah, don't say you've made money from something you haven't yet (I'm not saying you are, but the above post indicates that you might be) - you're not doing yourself or your subscribers-to-be any favours by doing so. There are lots of valuable things you can offer in exchange for opt-ins that are not methods, per se.

      Good luck!

      -Nadia
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5390271].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author HaroonRiaz
    Still need some help, drop a line.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[5521787].message }}

Trending Topics