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Who can CRUSH this sales letter?

by marlon
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Hey,

Marlon here.

Here's a sales letter I have no energy to work on:

Push Button Channel

Who can crush the copy on it?

PM your quote and your general approach. Or do you think this product has an angle that will sell?

It's not a big seller right now. I didn't hit the angle quite right. But with all the people doing streaming video stuff now, I believe it CAN sell if we found a better angle.

Marlon Sanders
#crush #letter #sales
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      • Profile picture of the author Mark McClure
        Vin,

        IMHO Long, wrong, gone :-)

        I deleted my post because I just saw OP's request to PM him.
        My bad.
        Thx for the reply.
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  • Profile picture of the author RareGoodStuff
    Hi Marlon,
    You have a great product but a poor sales copy.

    First, it's so long without a proper focus. Next, it lacks a DEMO video or Sampling.

    Most importantly, you have no testimonials. No Demo and no Testimonials will lack a punch needed to convert visitors to buyers.

    Personally, I like your product and may end buying it but I need to see it in action somehow.
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