What's the Best Way to Formulate a Killer Offer?

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There's been much talk about how to create a killer headline, bullets and even call to action. But I haven't seen as much on how to create a killer offer. Any thoughts and/or examples? Thanks for sharing.
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  • Profile picture of the author thehorizon
    It depends on the market's phase. If the customers are really sick and tired of the mechanisms constantly played out by the product creators (to the point of stagnancy), then I would suggest a new mechanism for an offer. Otherwise, it would make more sense to ride on the coat tails of the market leaders and expand on the offer's unique trait.

    It wouldn't hurt to have a new kind of product that does a certain thing in a different and innovative way. It activates the psychology of collecting.

    Headlines do a good job of finding the perfect hook for your offer in that market.
    Actually, a killer copy describes a killer offer... wouldn't you agree?
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    • Profile picture of the author The Niche Man
      Originally Posted by thehorizon View Post

      Actually, a killer copy describes a killer offer... wouldn't you agree?
      Sometimes yes and sometimes no. A lot of times a killer offer can drive killer copy, so I'm told. I've heard if you have a good offer, the copy is easy (or at least easier) to write, for example.
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  • Profile picture of the author jtunkelo
    There's no simple answer to this one. You can read Mark Joyner's The Irresistible Offer to get some clues about it, and then you'll learn it over time as you keep doing it.

    Here's a pretty good definition and description of what an offer is by David Garfinkel:
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    • Profile picture of the author The Niche Man
      Originally Posted by jtunkelo View Post

      There's no simple answer to this one. You can read Mark Joyner's The Irresistible Offer to get some clues about it, and then you'll learn it over time as you keep doing it.

      Here's a pretty good definition and description of what an offer is by David Garfinkel:
      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1llzhKlG17E
      Including the offer formulating information, I got about 5 bundling ideas from that short 7 minute video. Awesome!

      Thanks jtunkelo and thanks to Mr. Garfinkel
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  • Profile picture of the author Jennie Heckel
    Great ideas, and links!~ Thanks all!

    One of the things that I am constantly looking for in order to write high converting copy is what I call the "TWIST".

    What I mean it this.... How can you make your offer ~ unique.

    What is a unique and COMPELLING reason to Buy it NOW?

    Might be a short/limited/JV companion offer...

    Might be a special combination to something the visitor has purchased before...

    Might be a new add on to make your product easier to use...

    Everybody LOVES, easier, quicker, faster, less headache, easier to use, more versatile, simple 1, 2, 3 step process, takes minutes to figure out, works on more niches, etc...

    Think about how the buyer would use the product.

    Then think backwards -- what if the buyer is a newbie?

    What would be some stumbling blocks to using it?

    As someone who knows nothing about the offer and then ask them what is hard to use, understand, or what is MISSING they would like to have.

    Many times when you give out a free copy to collect testimonials you might ask for the biggest PROBLEM they would have with using it.

    Great way to bundle products, find a JV that offers a solution to the product's problems that were found on the samples given out for testimonials.

    Sometimes an obvious fault with the product is not apparrent as you are too close to it. Drill down on the problems to get at the not so obvious ones... you will be surprised at what you uncover. Go to a good PLR site and see what bundles are offered together, that is a super fast and sneaky way to get great products to rebrand for your own bundle. I add high end PLR products, videos, audios and software, and plugins to some of my clients original products and we rebrand them to enhance the main offer and to create value added bonuses.

    A superior product and tons of items bundled together for high value product suite, makes writing super converting copy --- so much easier!

    Good luck with your offer bundling...
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  • Profile picture of the author DougBarger
    Many folks are overcomplicating it.

    Let me make it really simple.

    Your offer consists of only 2 parts:

    1. What they get
    2. What they have to do to get it

    Now that you have it broken down cleanly in its most basic form,
    it's time to flesh it out to the point of irresistible.

    For starters, 1. you make #1 as valuable as possible.

    Then, 2. you make #2 seem as close to invisible as possible when compared
    to #1.

    In other words you work on making the "what you get" part of the offer as valuable as possible while making the "what you have to do to get it" as invisible and painless as possible.

    Of course there are many ways to accomplish this.

    The "value bomb" and the bonuses strategies are great ways to increase the #1.

    And allowing for a $1 trial for the first few days can go to great lengths to
    shrinking the "#2" down as small as possible in comparison.

    Naturally you'll want to suggest some apples to oranges comparisons
    where all the ultimate benefits of using the invaluable product makes it a no-brainer
    at the price you're asking especially when you consider the alternatives
    which don't provide nearly as many benefits, don't provide nearly as much value
    at nowhere near the same low, low investment.

    Once you nail down and flesh out your offer, it becomes immensely easier
    to sell it.

    Remember, it's your offer you are selling, not the product alone!

    Hope this helps.
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    • Yes - never, ever make it complicated.

      Another way, very similar to Doug's is -

      Choice 1 - The Cheapest - lots of value

      Choice 2 - More Expensive - even more value

      Choice 3 - Most Expensive - maximum value


      Most prospects go for Option 2 - they don't want to seem "cheap" but don't want to spend the money on option 3.


      Steve
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    • Profile picture of the author ChrisKahler
      A lot of great advice has already been given about this.

      Originally Posted by DougBarger View Post

      Many folks are overcomplicating it.

      Let me make it really simple.

      Your offer consists of only 2 parts:

      1. What they get
      2. What they have to do to get it

      Now that you have it broken down cleanly in its most basic form,
      it's time to flesh it out to the point of irresistible.
      This I agree with 100%, and gives a very straightforward method for fleshing out a killer offer.

      And what Steve Copywriter said is a great tactic to use as well... What I might add to the discussion is to really consider what an offer is.

      Rather than to see your offer as a product of service, consider the REASON you're selling something in the first place.

      I'm not talking about mere demand for a product on a market wide level, more of a personal reasoning within your prospect as to why they'd want the product.

      This is why great writers such as Clayton Makepeace always talk about daydreaming daily lives of their prospects, REALLY trying to get into their minds.

      Your offer is nothing more than complete solutions to very frustrating, painful, and annoying problems without presenting ANY kind of risk for trying out your solutions.

      This is just another way of stating what Doug's already said, but from the perspective of the prospect.

      Perception is everything in this business, and the perception your prospect has of your offer is what makes it "killer" to them.

      If they see your offer as the pure solution to their worst problems within the market you work in, and they perceive no risk involved with following through, then you've got a killer offer.
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      • Profile picture of the author The Niche Man
        Originally Posted by ChrisKahler View Post

        A lot of great advice has already been given about this.



        This I agree with 100%, and gives a very straightforward method for fleshing out a killer offer.

        And what Steve Copywriter said is a great tactic to use as well... What I might add to the discussion is to really consider what an offer is.

        Rather than to see your offer as a product of service, consider the REASON you're selling something in the first place.

        I'm not talking about mere demand for a product on a market wide level, more of a personal reasoning within your prospect as to why they'd want the product.

        This is why great writers such as Clayton Makepeace always talk about daydreaming daily lives of their prospects, REALLY trying to get into their minds.

        Your offer is nothing more than complete solutions to very frustrating, painful, and annoying problems without presenting ANY kind of risk for trying out your solutions.

        This is just another way of stating what Doug's already said, but from the perspective of the prospect.

        Perception is everything in this business, and the perception your prospect has of your offer is what makes it "killer" to them.

        If they see your offer as the pure solution to their worst problems within the market you work in, and they perceive no risk involved with following through, then you've got a killer offer.
        I think one of the biggest challenges is making the "Free Offer" engaging. The bar is constantly rising now. The free offer has to almost be as exciting as the product itself. At least that's the way it's trending.
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        • Profile picture of the author The Niche Man
          Originally Posted by copyassassin View Post

          Am I the only one who's reading these replies, laughing?

          Seriously, you people make creating an offer seem like "rocket science".

          Just ask your target clients what they want? Which, they'll probably reply, "I don't know."

          Since I'm a tax guy, let me give you a tax related example.

          "Joe, what tax problem wakes you up at 3 am?" "Joe, what are the ramications of this problem in your life. Your professional life? Your financial life? Your sex life?"

          LISTEN. LISTEN. LISTEN. To the answers. Put them in your head.

          Next, google: screwed over by tax accountant. READ. READ. READ. replies. Put that in your head. Figure out what other people did wrong. When people are pissed about something, and go on a rant (hmmmm I think I know a person like this), they tend to be very specific on their issues and what the person should of done.

          Next, go to amazon.com and search for books on the specific issues Joe is having. Look at the 5 star reviews. Look at the 1 start reviews. Put that into your brain.

          Go away for a couple of days. And ask your subsciounes to think about Joe and his specific problem, and other people how've been screwed over. And what the amazon.com folks seem to think is important.

          And ask your brain to come up with a solution. However, please ask nicely.

          And then go do something unrelated and wait for your brain to give you an answer.

          Your subsciouness is designed to solve problems without you having "to think about it".

          And believe it or not, your brain will reply when it's ready.

          Test. Tweak. Retest. Retweak. Test Again....

          ...until you convert at an acceptable rate for you.

          Simple.
          Good tips, thanks, awesome insights. The only thing is not everyone is on a speaking realtionship with their subconcious mind.

          And I don't think the people here are giving rocket science comments. Most of the ideas have worked for the individuals and the others are common sense, like the comments you just gave ... each with a personal twist. That makes for balanced insight from different points of view.

          That's good ... "I can do that now and benefit" information.
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  • Profile picture of the author abugah
    I think a killer offer depends on the market and product.
    Perhaps we can start by examining blockbuster letters of the past.

    I have in mind the …
    -Wall Street Journal letter -two young men.
    -International living letter –you look out your window.
    - Popular Mechanics letter-this invitation is not for deadbeats.
    - Newsweek letter -if the list upon which I found your name.
    - American Express letter-quite frankly.
    - Eugene Schwartz letter-burn disease out of your body.
    And many others.

    I don’t see an exact formula in formulating an offer.
    Each letter has a unique offer. But the basic
    human desires are at the core of these offers.

    Don’t you think so?
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    • Profile picture of the author The Niche Man
      Originally Posted by abugah View Post

      I think a killer offer depends on the market and product.
      Perhaps we can start by examining blockbuster letters of the past.

      I have in mind the …
      -Wall Street Journal letter -two young men.
      -International living letter –you look out your window.
      - Popular Mechanics letter-this invitation is not for deadbeats.
      - Newsweek letter -if the list upon which I found your name.
      - American Express letter-quite frankly.
      - Eugene Schwartz letter-burn disease out of your body.
      And many others.

      I don’t see an exact formula in formulating an offer.
      Each letter has a unique offer. But the basic
      human desires are at the core of these offers.

      Don’t you think so?
      I agree to a certain extent. But it seems offers are going past basic human desires - to human cravings or obsessions to get (skeptical) people to act these days.
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  • Profile picture of the author Bruce Wedding
    A killer offer is simply one that a reasonable member of your target audience can't say "no" to. It has to be unbelievable value with zero risk.
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    • Profile picture of the author The Niche Man
      Originally Posted by Bruce Wedding View Post

      A killer offer is simply one that a reasonable member of your target audience can't say "no" to. It has to be unbelievable value with zero risk.
      Good answer. But ... How to do you give the "unbelievable value"with "zero"
      risk offer without triggering the too-good-to-be true alarm in prospect mind?

      Any thoughts?
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      • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
        Originally Posted by The Niche Man View Post

        Good answer. But ... How to do you give the "unbelievable value"with "zero"
        risk offer without triggering the too-good-to-be true alarm in prospect mind?

        Any thoughts?
        A good REASON WHY.
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        • Profile picture of the author DougBarger
          Originally Posted by BrianMcLeod View Post

          A good REASON WHY.
          Yes. Think about how many times you've heard,

          "Everything Must Go!", "Furniture Liquidation Sale", "Scratch and Dent Sale", "Firesale", "Moving Sale"...

          Or the vast number of still-working top internet marketing professionals
          who have their semi-annual "I'm Retiring Sale" or "I Quit Sale".

          And think of all the times you've read an ad in a newspaper with a seemingly too good to be real life offer and before you could ask yourself,

          "Well if it's so good, why is the price so affordable?," you read...

          --where the author says they're moving and 'must sell' or they hate to part with it but they can't take it with them, the list goes on.

          These are all good or at least "workable" reasons of being to justify
          your own 'special event'.

          I also remember many "Birthday" events where the marketer says,
          It may be my birthday, but this year, I'm giving You the gift!

          And of course, the straightforward, "I want to win your lifetime business so I'm shamelessly but ethically bribing you with this too good to be true mother of all bonuses offer admission" offer angle.

          There are so many to swipe from you don't really even have to be creative anymore.

          However, what about...

          the "The World Didn't End in 2012 Afterall Celebration" Sale?
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      • Profile picture of the author Bruce Wedding
        Originally Posted by The Niche Man View Post

        Good answer. But ... How to do you give the "unbelievable value"with "zero"
        risk offer without triggering the too-good-to-be true alarm in prospect mind?

        Any thoughts?
        Hi Niche Man,

        Yep, I regretted using that word "unbelievable" after I wrote it. How do you do it though? You make the unbelievable, believable with proof. This can be testimonials, demonstrations, credentials and documentation, lab results, case studies, whatever is appropriate and convincing.

        All copy needs the 4 P's:

        Problem - The problem your product solves
        Promise - A promise to solve the problem
        Proof - Proof your product solves the problem
        Proposition - The irresistible offer
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  • Profile picture of the author John_S
    1. Develop a killer product.

    2. Write a press release for a full hands-on by press, select reviewers, influential bloggers, etc.

    3. Video the press event and participant interaction with the product/service, garner rave comments and demo factor.

    4. Profit!

    (Step one is the hardest).
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