Critiques From A Pre-Sales Page made by 15 Years Old Copywriter, Who doesn't Speak English Fluently
As you can see that, I'm a newbie. I'm only 15 years old and English is not my first language. I'm very new in Copywriting.
Now my first project is working as an affiliate and promoting Rock*t Spanish.
Here's my Pre-Sales page
my presales page
hxxp://spanish-fluently.com/letter/miracle/
PS: pleas change xx to : tt
Please give me critique from that page,
I have a question Should I direct the order to sales page so the customers have to read Rock*t Spanish default sales page or
Should I direct to the order page so they can order without reading the default Sales Page?
Please Give me Critique, I'm newbie and there are lot of things to learn. Please forgive my bad English, if you discover a grammar error in my pre-sales page please let me know. As you know that English is not my first language.
Please give me critique
Best Regards
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