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2nd Critque Needed Please

by marc643
4 replies
Hey Guys,

I had some great advice from you all previously and have made changes, and would really appreciate some more feedback/ constructive criticism.

My sales page is here

Please let me know what you think and any ideas to improve it.

thanks in advance
#2nd #critque #needed
  • Profile picture of the author marc643
    Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post

    You desperately need a unique selling proposition for this product. Your sales approach is exactly the same as every other ab product out there and you're the new kid at the party.

    Find someone to brainstorm with. Approach this from an entirely different perspective. Think cartoons, radio ad copy, parody, something --anything-- to set yourself apart.

    Hey Ken,

    Thanks for your time and interesting point, would the fact that i have videos built into my ebook so it is an all inclusive interactive course be a unique selling point to you? Therefore the user can see the exercises of each workout directly beneath it. Or do you mean something completely different?

    Thanks
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    • Profile picture of the author marc643
      Hey Ken thanks for the advice, much appreciated.

      Anyone else care to share their opinions with me and give me some feedback?
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