Please Critique My Sales Page

I understand why you're highlighting "the excitement, the buzz, the adrenaline" (to get those emotions rising), but it's a little too early for that ploy, IMO. A lot of prospects are wise to such tactics and will be turned off if they appear too early. Save it for when they are already half-sold.

Some of the copy itself is pretty good. You have a story and a hook. You're on the right track there.

What appear to be "testimonial boxes" look too much like actual testimonials rather than your own experiences. It comes off as deceptive. Consider re-formatting that section into normal headers and paragraphs.

This area also needs revision:

Your first question here is actually limiting your prospects and screening many of them out. A lot of people just want to make money and they don't care whether they have to bet on Olympic snail racing to do it. Why screen out your prospects who couldn't care less about horse racing but do want to make a lot of money? I'd say drop question 1 (and maybe #2 also) and replace them with questions that don't screen out potential prospects, such as these:

So let me ask you a few questions:
1. Do you like having the freedom to work anywhere?
2. Do you like never having to pay taxes?
3. Do you want to make huge sums of money?
4. Do you want to live the dream?

Your PS section is awful, it needs to be expanded, and the "go get rich now" has got to go. Language like that conjures up images of "get rich quick schemes," which scream "scam" to most prospects.

If you want to know the specifics of how the PS section ought to be expanded and the overall copy improved, send a PM and hire me. We're professionals here and there's a limit to free advice.

I hope this has helped.

Best wishes,
-Zentech