Critique and assistance appreciated
I am in the early stages of trying to sort out a new product for a wso and outside of the forum, my mentors have advise me to see if anyone would be so kind enough whom are more familiar than I am with copywriting to please take a look at my starting effort and all helpful tips hints etc would be most appreciated
Here is the link
http://www.warriorforum.com/test-forum/526748-m1-test.html#post5467822
Again any assistance is welcome
Thanks very much in advance
Andrew Gould