Critique of 150 Word Voiceover
I'm launching Animated Website Videos & Video Explainers at Web Video for Business | We create Web Videos for Business and currently coming up with my 60 second voiceover script to sell our custom animated video service!
This is what I have, do you think it's compelling enough?
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Did you know that consumers are 72% more likely to purchase an online product when video is used?
If a picture is worth a thousand words, then a moving picture is worth soo much more!
You see, the people of today don't want to spend their valuable time reading[change to bored tone] looong, boring pages of text and information.
Immediate gratification is where it's at when it comes to surfing the web, and if you have a video that makes people laugh (short pause for laughter) or has an unique message (short pause for "ooo" sound?), it can be bookmarked and shared on all the social networking sites across the web giving your website more exposure!
Grab their full attention with an fully custom, frame-by-frame built animated video that explains to the world how your product or idea works in under 2 minutes.
It's a fun and easy way to tell the world what you're alll about, and we can help you make your own animation exactly the way you want it to be!
The future of marketing is in video and animation, and with Web Video for Business, we'll help make your marketing a success!
So if your ready for your business to blow up in a big way, let our team of expert business animators create something amazing for you! Contact Web Video For Businesses today for a FREE quote!
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Thanks, I'd really appreciate any of your ideas and feedback
Nick
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