Critique my headline please : )
Creating a new mineral/organic makeup product, and wanted feedback on my working headline:
"The Secret To Looking Beautifully Natural Is A New Organic Makeup So Pure You Can Sleep In It"
What do you think?
Lackluster?
Boring and unpowerful?
So amazing, you want me to marry into your family?
Please leave a few words, and I will be very appreciative!
Thanks,
JD.
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