Please tear into me.
I just am trying to sell my first info product ever and I was wondering if anyone could critique it for me.
My Sales Page Mini Site
I am new at this but feel free to get down to the nit and grit of critiques.
I have never written sales copy in my entire life and I didn't write this either, I just added to it. I tried to make everything flow and make sense.
Been making money offline selling websites, marketing, and mobile websites, but if at all possible for me I would much rather make money online.
Anyways thanks,
I hope I get some good stuff.
Ryan
<a href="http://bestmobi.us">I build and sell mobile websites.</a> /
<a href="http://drobelinc.net">I do internet Marketing.</a> /
2-3 page mobile website for warriors for $45. If you want more we can talk. Just PM Me.