Critique My Copy and Get My Program Free
I've written a video sales script that I'd like reviewed and advice on how I can make it even better.
The link is for a .doc or .pdf and not the sales page itself as the sales page will be a video with text and voice-over once complete.
https://s3.amazonaws.com/excuseproof/EPSalesComplete.pdf
https://s3.amazonaws.com/excuseproof/EPSalesComplete.doc
In exchange for a critique and advice, I will send you to a download page where you can download my entire course (20+ mp3s, 350pg ebook, essentials guide, quickstart guide, resources guide, etc.) for FREE! Send me a private message for link.
Also, a suggested retail price for this stuff would be great after you take a look at it. I figure the ebook will sell for $39-$47 dollars, full program for 97-147 ish (more?) or whatever.
You can see what I've done very informally for my family and friends at:
Offer | Excuse Proof Fitness
If someone simply wants to give a quick first impression without actually reading it all through, then I can send you the link to the quickstart guide and audios as compensation.
Thanks!
Andrew Gould
âJudge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it.â
― Dalai Lama XIV
âJudge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it.â
― Dalai Lama XIV
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